The 7 Rules: The Amateur Way vs. The Pro Way
Rule 1: The "Above the Fold" Real Estate
The Amateur Way: They waste the top of the page with a vague slogan like "Welcome to the Future" or a giant stock photo of people shaking hands. The user has to scroll to find out what the company actually does.
The Pro Way: They treat the area above the fold as the "make or break" zone. The headline states the specific promise, and the sub-headline explains how it works.
Rule 2: The "We" vs. "You" Ratio
The Amateur Way: The copy is filled with "We are the best," "Our history," and "We provide solutions." It is an ego trip for the business owner.
The Pro Way: The copy focuses relentlessly on the user. It uses the word "You" five times more than the word "We."
Rule 3: Specificity vs. Fluff (Unique Value Proposition)
The Amateur Way: Uses generic fluff like "World-class service" or "Top-quality products." These words are invisible because everyone uses them.
The Pro Way: Uses radical specificity to define their unique value proposition.
Amateur: "Fast delivery."
Pro: "Delivered to your door in 45 minutes."
The Rule: Specificity breeds trust. Vague claims breed skepticism.
Rule 4: Scannability (Mobile-Friendly Copy)
The Amateur Way: Writes long, dense paragraphs that look like a college essay. On a desktop, it looks fine. On a phone, it looks like a "wall of text" that forces users to leave.
The Pro Way: Writes mobile-friendly copy. They use one-sentence paragraphs, bold text for emphasis, and bullet points for everything.
Rule 5: Selling the "After" State (Benefits)
The Amateur Way: Lists the features. "This vacuum has a V8 motor and HEPA filter." They assume the customer knows why that matters.
The Pro Way: Sells the transformation. "Cut your cleaning time in half and never breathe dust again."
Rule 6: Proof Over Promises
The Amateur Way: Asks the user to take their word for it.
The Pro Way: Knows that the user is a skeptic. They use "Social Proof" as a weapon. But not just any proof, they use specific numbers, logos, and outcomes.
Amateur: "Customers love us."
Pro: "Used by 5,400+ agencies to generate $10M in revenue."
The Rule: A claim without proof is just noise.
Rule 7: The "Command" Button (Compelling Call to Action)
The Amateur Way: Uses a tiny, ghost button that says "Submit" or "Contact." It blends into the background.
The Pro Way: Uses a compelling call to action that is high-contrast and uses "Command" verbs.
Example: "Claim My Discount," "Start My Free Trial," "Get Results Now."
The Rule: Your button is the victory lap. Make it impossible to miss and exciting to click.